Making headway

So,

 

I didnt get a great deal of feedback on the prologue, but hopefully I can get more from the first chapter.

https://digitalpariahuk.wordpress.com/my-other-work/unfinished-novel/chapter-1/

I’ve always known that the structure for dialogue was one of my biggest weaknesses. I just wonder if others feel the same.

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And so it begins

Well, the game of the year work out of the way, I finally found time to get my novel started and up and online. 

I do have a full outline of the story, with approximately 20 key events during the course of the book, but as I said before I fail to retain the drive to get it finished. 

 

Now that the prologue is up, I can hopefully get some constructive feedback to push me to getting the damn thing finished finally.