Making headway

So,

 

I didnt get a great deal of feedback on the prologue, but hopefully I can get more from the first chapter.

https://digitalpariahuk.wordpress.com/my-other-work/unfinished-novel/chapter-1/

I’ve always known that the structure for dialogue was one of my biggest weaknesses. I just wonder if others feel the same.

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